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Star Trek: 09 Kirk/both Spocks

Japanese version is here. [link]

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:iconmondriana:
Cute!!!!!!!

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La luna es de papel...
:iconkinichikun:
Tribble trip! XD
I think I kind of get what's going on so that's ok

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Gacktのファンが最も大きい。
:iconmatsutakedo:
I think that it's fine. ;)
:iconkinichikun:
Your translation is fine I understand it ^^

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Gacktのファンが最も大きい。
:iconpriestessofnox:
Blushing Kirk is so cute! :love:
Would it be possible to get a translation?

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I don't have a problem with canon, non-canon, straight, gay or any other of that nonsense. I have a problem with incest but as long as it isn't real life & it is drawn well I will pretend that they're not related for the sake of a job well done. Love wins
:iconmatsutakedo:
I tried it.
But I have no confidence in this translation...X(
:iconpriestessofnox:
Your translation is pretty good. It doesn't quite sound right in some places but you can tell what is going on.

Just a few minor changes could be made to this page.

In the 5th panel Jim should say "my ankle" and not "an ankle"

The 6th panel sounds awkward. You should rephrase it as "Oh, that sounds bad".

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I don't have a problem with canon, non-canon, straight, gay or any other of that nonsense. I have a problem with incest but as long as it isn't real life & it is drawn well I will pretend that they're not related for the sake of a job well done. Love wins

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